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Shakespeare and the 19th-Century NovelA Christmas CarolDickensGreedSocial Commentary

AQA GCSE · Question 08 · Shakespeare and the 19th-Century Novel

SOURCE TEXT:
Read the following extract from Chapter 2 of A Christmas Carol and then answer the question that follows.

In this extract, the Ghost of Christmas Past shows Scrooge his last meeting with Belle.

This was not addressed to Scrooge, or to any one whom he could see, but it produced an immediate effect. For again Scrooge saw himself. He was older now; a man in the prime of life. His face had not the harsh and rigid lines of later years; but it had begun to wear the signs of care and avarice. There was an eager, greedy, restless motion in the eye, which showed the passion that had taken root, and where the shadow of the growing tree would fall.
He was not alone, but sat by the side of a fair young girl in a mourning-dress: in whose eyes there were tears, which sparkled in the light that shone out of the Ghost of Christmas Past.
"It matters little,” she said, softly. "To you, very little. Another idol has displaced me; and if it can cheer and comfort you in time to come, as I would have tried to do, I have no just cause to grieve.”
"What Idol has displaced you?” he rejoined.
"A golden one."
"This is the even-handed dealing of the world!" he said. “There is nothing on which it is so hard as poverty; and there is nothing it professes to condemn with such severity as the pursuit of wealth!"
"You fear the world too much,” she answered, gently. “All your other hopes have merged into the hope of being beyond the chance of its sordid reproach. I have seen your nobler aspirations fall off one by one, until the master-passion, Gain, engrosses you. Have I not?”
"What then?" he retorted. “Even if I have grown so much wiser, what then? I am not changed towards you."
She shook her head.
"Am I?"
"Our contract is an old one. It was made when we were both poor and content to be so, until, in good season, we could improve our worldly fortune by our patient industry. You are changed. When it was made, you were another man.”
"I was a boy,” he said impatiently.
"Your own feeling tells you that you were not what you are,” she returned. “I am. That which promised happiness when we were one in heart, is fraught with misery now that we are two. How often and how keenly I have thought of this, I will not say. It is enough that I have thought of it, and can release you."

QUESTION:
Starting with this extract, explore how Dickens presents the effects of greed in A Christmas Carol.

Write about:
• how Dickens presents the effects of greed in this extract
• how Dickens presents the effects of greed in the novel as a whole.

How to approach this question

1. Begin by analysing the dialogue between Scrooge and Belle in the extract. Focus on Belle's reasons for leaving him and Scrooge's defensive reactions. 2. Formulate a thesis about how Dickens presents greed as a force that corrupts individuals and harms society. 3. Structure your essay to explore the different effects of greed. Dedicate paragraphs to its effect on Scrooge's personality, his relationships (with Belle, Fred, and Cratchit), and on wider society (the poor). 4. Use the three ghosts as a structural device in your essay, showing how each one reveals a different aspect of the consequences of greed. 5. Discuss Scrooge's redemption as the novel's central message: that it is possible to overcome greed and find happiness in generosity. 6. Conclude by summarising Dickens's social commentary on the dangers of avarice in Victorian England.

Full Answer

A strong answer will analyse how the extract shows the personal, emotional cost of greed. Scrooge's 'master-passion, Gain,' has caused him to lose Belle, the love of his life. Belle points out that he has changed from the man she agreed to marry, and that his obsession with wealth ('a golden one') has replaced her. This shows greed leads to isolation and the loss of human connection. The answer should then broaden to the rest of the novel. Greed is shown to be the source of Scrooge's misery at the start of the book, making him a solitary, disliked figure. Dickens also presents the social effects of greed through the poverty of the Cratchits and the allegorical figures of Ignorance and Want. The novel is a clear moral fable arguing that greed is a destructive force, both personally and socially, and that the only path to happiness is through charity, empathy, and generosity, as demonstrated by Scrooge's transformation.
This question asks you to explore the theme of greed in 'A Christmas Carol'. The extract provides a key moment from Scrooge's past that explains the origin of his miserly character. Your essay should use this as a starting point to discuss the wider personal and social consequences of greed as depicted by Dickens. You should analyse how the novel functions as a critique of the pursuit of wealth at the expense of human compassion and community.

Common mistakes

A common mistake is to only focus on Scrooge and forget to discuss the wider social commentary in the novel, such as the plight of the poor represented by the Cratchits. Another error is to simply retell the story of Scrooge's transformation without analysing *how* Dickens presents the theme of greed through specific literary techniques.

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